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Tuesday, 18 December 2018

My hometown (SLJ)

Hello guys

This is my second fun activity  I will be doing for summer learning journey is telling you about my hometown and what makes it so special about it and use describing words. I would describe my hometown beautiful because of all the scenery and gardens. I would also describe my home town friendly because of all the friendly people who live here. I would also describe it as big because of all the big places to see like gondola, willow banks wildlife and more . I would also describe Christchurch lucky because of all the big exciting things to see. There is lots of was to describe Christchurch and these are a some of the ways I would describe it.

How would you describe your hometown?


Did you like my describing words?



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3 comments:

  1. Talofa Talisa,

    Wow, you must really like your hometown! I like Christchurch too - it is a very pretty city, with lovely parks, trees and gardens. I particularly like Christchurch in spring time when all the daffodils come out in Hagley Park!

    My hometown, Nelson, is lovely too. We have a national park called Abel Tasman National Park which is very beautiful - lovely native bush, golden sand beaches, and aqua blue water.

    From Laura

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  2. Hi Talisa,

    Love the way you describe your hometown. Maybe next time you could use other ways in writing like using and...because... instead of repeating I to begin your sentence.
    Keep up the good work.

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