Verbs & Adverbs

Ohayou Gozaimasu,

Today in class we learned and did some work on verbs and adverbs.

Verb - A word that describes an action (Basically a doing-word)

Examples of Verbs

1. She sprinted back to class.

2. He muttered at the teacher.

Adverb - A word that describes a verb

Examples of Adverbs

1. She slowly sprinted back to class.

2. He quietly muttered at the teacher.

Some of my Work

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Describing for Writing

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This term our writing has been discription writing. In a discription we learned that it needed to show not tell, its not a story, it needs to describe a moment in time, describe hear, see, smell, feel taste, paint a picture in the readers head, write in present tense and using descriptive language. To be honest I find it hard to descriptive writing. Its not my favourite type.

Anyway here is my writing from this week

The people

The smiles on the kids faces made the party thrilling. Party popers blew off and made them giggle.

Excitement is right in the air. Birthday girls face flushed bright pink. She beamed as brightly as the lit

candles on top of the chocolate, gooey, beautiful cake. They stared at each other and the food.

By the way this is the photo I was trying to describe

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A Narrative

 Talofa Everyone,

This week we made a narrative for writing in class. My story is bassiaclly about a princess called Ashitaya who runs away from the world and hides in her castle on top of  the hill. Then one day this guy called Brick comes and keeps annoying her asking her to marry him. So she decided to hire a person to kill him for her. But she kills the killer in the end to leave no witnesses and Brick the guy who died by the hitman marrys an angel instead. Then Brick meets the killer and thanks him.

Here is my story but i'm still not finshed yet

The waves were going up and down like the wind rushing towards Ashintaya. Ashintaya sat by herself in the shade trying to hide from the world . She had the most beautiful smooth skin and pitch dark hair which covered her round eyes. People kept on showering her with countless gifts and presents which was a pain. Her feet were moving a lot and went into her castle to never see anyone again. 

Woosh the wind rushed in as a familiar voice spoke. “Will you marry me my love? I love you so much I fell for you ever since I saw you,” the man suddenly proposed. Then Ashintaya suddenly relized and knew  who it was. The weirdo called Brick who was very rich. 

Ashintaya took off her white soft glove and slapped him with them. “I don’t love you peasant begone I rebuke you and banish you from this kingdom.” she answered. Brick knelt with his arms in the air as the tears in his eyes quickly and kept on coming down. He screamed as if he was about to die like the worst thing in his entire life just happened.

The next morning Ashintaya looked out her window to see Brick. Her teeth started to grit and she held a fist.  Veins started showing everywhere on her body. Ashintaya tried to cool off but she couldn’t while seeing Bricks face it somehow irritated the princess.    

 

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The Writing

Bonjour Readers,

For Writing we did an information report. My information report was on possums. I think possums are big possums. I learned about them when I was younger and read about how possums came to NZ and became a huge problem. Anyway hope reading my writing or if you don't want to read it you don't need to.

Here is my information Report

Intro

The possum an animal sent from Australia to New Zealand who is eating up most of our
native animals. It is an annoying pest to NZ. Learn more about the possum in this information report. 

Appearance

Possums are big and furry with a pointed snout and large pointed ears. Grey and white are two colour
forms of the species. Some people find possums cute but really their big pests. They have big beady
eyes and are quite fat with whiskers. Its tail is bushy and dirty. Claws are tiny and has lots of fur but don’t
be fooled by looks. 

Habitait

Possums are nocturnal and are able to live anywhere with shelter and also a variety of food supply. They
are widespread across New Zealand because of the fur trade from Australia. The main habitat of the
possum is most likely to be the forest.

Eat 

Possums are omnivores they eat leaves, flowers, leaf buds, fruit, eggs, birds, insects and snails. But mainly they
eat leaves for their diet. They also eat pasture so there is less food for farm animals. People used to think
that Possums only ate plants but in 1993 the possums were caught on film eating the eggs and chicks of
endangered kōkako. 

Movement

ts tail helps them move around tree branches. Possums move vertically across steep terrian. Male
possums are twice as likely to travel as females. Possums travel to and from pasture on the same night.
Possums can be helpful by eating cockroaches, rats, mice and dead animals.

Special Thing

Possums carry a disease called bovine Tb which they spread to cattle. The damage caused by possums
cost NZ farmers about $35 Million each year. The NZ government spends over $110 million per year to
control the population of possums.

Coclusion

I hope possums will stop being a problem to the people in NZ. Also I hope that possums can find 
a good home for them back in Australia. So they can stop eating our native plants and animals. 

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The Word Count

Talofa and Welcome,

This week we had a hundred word count. A hundred word count is just a story with exactly 100 words including the prompt our teacher gives us.  A prompt can be picture, sentance or words. We get new prompts each week.

Here is my 100 word count for this week

…that’s when I knew I should run…

Storm struck and the night was dark. I was walking home late at night from work.
While walking I started hearing footsteps behind me. I looked back and saw nothing. So I
shrugged my shoulders and continued walking down the path. While walking I felt like someone
was behind me I looked back and there was a mysterious figure in the distance that’s when I
knew I should run. Straight away I could hear him running towards me. “What do you want” I
shouted then found out that is what actually my brother. I felt relived and angry but relieved.

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It is intresting and lovely?

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Tofa