Talofa and Welcome,
This week we had a hundred word count. A hundred word count is just a story with exactly 100 words including the prompt our teacher gives us. A prompt can be picture, sentance or words. We get new prompts each week.
Here is my 100 word count for this week
Do you like my story?
It is intresting and lovely?
Thanks for reading my blog post feel free to comment.
Tofa
This week we had a hundred word count. A hundred word count is just a story with exactly 100 words including the prompt our teacher gives us. A prompt can be picture, sentance or words. We get new prompts each week.
Here is my 100 word count for this week
…that’s when I knew I should run…
Storm struck and the night was dark. I was walking home late at night from work.
While walking I started hearing footsteps behind me. I looked back and saw nothing. So I
shrugged my shoulders and continued walking down the path. While walking I felt like someone
was behind me I looked back and there was a mysterious figure in the distance that’s when I
knew I should run. Straight away I could hear him running towards me. “What do you want” I
shouted then found out that is what actually my brother. I felt relived and angry but relieved.
While walking I started hearing footsteps behind me. I looked back and saw nothing. So I
shrugged my shoulders and continued walking down the path. While walking I felt like someone
was behind me I looked back and there was a mysterious figure in the distance that’s when I
knew I should run. Straight away I could hear him running towards me. “What do you want” I
shouted then found out that is what actually my brother. I felt relived and angry but relieved.
Do you like my story?
It is intresting and lovely?
Thanks for reading my blog post feel free to comment.
Tofa
I did like your story Talisa,and thought that you did a great job at making a short story make sense.
ReplyDeleteI almost felt scared as I read your blog.I don't like walking in the dark by myself so I know how you'd be feeling.
What sort of work were you doing?.
Hi Miss Cassidy, Thanks for commenting on my blog. The type of work I was doing was for reading. Anyway thanks again for commenting. Goodbye
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