Konichiwa Everbody,
Doing anything for Christmas?
This week for our 100 word count we had to put in "I didin't remember putting it on". So I wrote a story about a girl called sally who couldn't the watch that her mother and father gave before they died. Then started crying and turns out it was on her wrist where the "I didin't remeber putting it on" comes in. Then she thanks god and god smiles back at her.
Here is the story
...I didn't remember putting it on..
One day sally was looking for her beautiful golden glittery watch. She woke up one morning and couldn't find it. That watch was the most valuable thing to her. Before her father and mother died they gave her a watch. So Sally looked under her bed, inside her draws and even in her auntys hair. But couldn't find it at all. Sally began to cry. The pillow was flooded with tears. Then she saw her watch on her wrist. “I didn’t remember putting it on” Sally said but she was happy and thanked god. God smiled right back at her
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Hello Talisa.
ReplyDeleteI was going to read your learning but the words are going across the page.Can you change them so they read downwards.
Thank you.Once you've done that I'll read it and comment.
Have a lovely holiday and Christmas.