Hello today I am going to show you my work. Our class has been learning about the body for our topic. We got split up into topic groups and we both got taught different things about the body. We learned about three systems. The endocrine system, circulatory system and the skeletal system. This is my work please give me feed back.
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, 5 September 2018
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Hi Talisa
ReplyDeleteI found the information on your blog really interesting, and I like the clear way that you set it out which made it really easy to read.I now know what homeostatis is. Can you tell me what are some of the chemicals that are made by the body
Raewyn - Teacher Aide.
Good Job Talisa, I think you're smarter than me. I found your information very smart for a person your age.
ReplyDeleteGood job Talisa. You need to help me do this. You have more interesting facts then me and I didn't even know them and we are in the same topic group.I haven't even finish mine yet please comment back bye.
ReplyDeleteHey Nevaeh. I would love to help you and I am sure you have some interesting facts that are even more interesting then mine.
DeleteHello Talisa. The body is an amazing piece of work. We certainly need to look after it. I like the font size you have used and the white writing on the black background makes your words stand out. It is well set out by using columns. You taught me something new, I didn't realize that our bones are made of hard minerals. Can you please tell me what minerals they are? Have a good day
ReplyDeleteCatchy title....
ReplyDeleteHope by learning about the human body, you have a better understand as to why each and everyone of us are unique; and that we need to take care of our body.
Would be nice if you add pictures to show what you're talking about.
Keep up the good work.